Newest Poem... i wrote it in one night.. message me if you want to ask questions about it.


Awakening, By Scott J Whitney Sept 29th/08

Youthful Extacy,
Love Shrouds The Mind,
Hastening Poetic Hearts,
I Must React,
And Let My Quill Bleed,

Lust's Jealous Fist,
Strikes Til Final Breath,
Cries In Darkness,
For Wooing His Love,
And Ended My Life,

In Tunnels Of Light,
A Woman At The End,
My Name Whispered Softly
Am I In Heaven?,
Or Is This My Hell?,

No Words Needed,
Only Glances Exchanged,
Ignited Sun,
Makes Her Gleam,
And I Go Blind,

God Bless Murder,
For It Brought Me To Her,
A Fool Lives Below,
I Am Her Savior,
And She's My Eternity,

Backhanded Tears,
Lust Rips Past's Dress,
Distorting Her World,
With Gentle Touch?,
Or Savage Deeds?,

Past's Virtue Broken,
The Furious Kings Rage,
Shackles Overwhelm,
A Trial Starts,
And Torture Begins,

Hands Intertwined,
I Try To Speak,
She Shows Affection,
Before Sound Leaves,
And I Am Speechless,

The Guillotine Falls,
My World Is Silent,
Feelings Need No Words,
Justice Prevails?,
Or Constant Death?,

Past Never Changes,
Kings Satisfied,
Time Continues,
Lust Is No More,
I Am Awake.
Unknown Rabid - 15 years, 7 months, 20 days ago

The Most Satisfying Thing After Writing A 2000 Word Paper

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Sleeping Til 4pm Cause Nothing Else Has To Be Done!!!

be aware that i have plenty more songs/poems in my tales its just that they disappear on a other page when i create a new tale.... tell me your favorite.. i like to hear comments

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p.s im getting drunk this weekend and so stoked... also getting my tattoo soon
Unknown Rabid - 16 years, 1 month, 21 days ago

so im currently addicted to Atreyu... is that a bad thing....
Unknown Rabid - 16 years, 2 months, 13 days ago

*sigh of relief*
ok finished posting all the lyrics and poems ive done that i felt should be read

anyways if u manage to stumble on this page and survive, feel free to comment and tell me what you think.

and yes i know... i do tend to be sappy when i write... u don't have to remind me lol
Unknown Rabid - 16 years, 2 months, 20 days ago

Most recent work..Tell me what you think about this one.

The Goddess and the Fool, By Scott J.Whitney

Stunned In Motion,
An Array Of Sparks,
Her Shimmering Gaze,
Two Eclipses Of Hazel,
Encased With Light,

The Long Haired Fool,
With Parchment And Quill,
Staring And Speechless,
A Radiant Beauty,
Inspiration Rains Down,

Her Amber Strands,
Ignite The Sky,
With Crimson Lips,
Matched With Glowing Cheeks,
Dazed Is The Fool,

He Wants To Speak,
But Fears Ignorance,
He Wishes To Gesture,
But His Arms Are Stone,
Emotions Overwhelm,

When She Smiles,
Courage Fills The Fool,
His Thoughts Made Clear,
As She Approaches,
His Arms Are Set Free,

Looking Down From The Heavens,
The Gods Dismayed,
Hera Pulls Zeus Away,
Venus Cowers In Envy,
And Athena Schemes,

The Moonlight Maiden,
Holds Out Her Hand,
An Ink Covered Palm,
Meets Skin Of Silk,
And Time Stands Still,

The Poet Asks Her Name,
She Smiles Softly With Grace,
Lost In Each Other’s Stare,
Art Framed In Moonlight,
The Cosmos Collide,


Her Cheek Brushes His,
And She Tilts His Chin,
Nearing Sweet Embrace,
They Close Their Eyes,
Alone Stands A Man,

The Man Turns Home,
And Strokes A Name,
Parchment Laced With Ink,
And Laid On His Bed,
Trying To Sleep,
But She’s Stuck In His Head.

Unknown Rabid - 16 years, 2 months, 20 days ago