(( this is a story that I sort of been working on.. please tell me if it's any good and that I should continue it ))
Introduction
the murder
That's the last time I order pizza from that place again!! yelled my roomate bob who was cleaning the table of it's junk. "what's the matter? i thought
it was good" I said but he just kept going towards the kitchen. I began trying to do my part when all of a sudden I heard a crash "hey bob what's the matter?"
no answer so I got scared but it was probably a joke so I just went in and I almost fainted with the image I saw. My roomate was laying in a pool of blood
on the floor. I ran to get the phone and called the police. I began to dial the numbers but then I noticed that there was blood on my fingers! I couldn't
believe it. I knew I diddn't kill him.. but just in case I washed my hands in the sink and then I called the police again... In just a few min. the police
arived. I opened the door and let them in. I was pretty shooken up so I just sat on the couch with my hands too my face still remembering the blood on my
fingers... When the cops were done gathering the body they began to question me. I told them all that happened except for the blood of course and they
diddn't believe me that I diddn't hear a gunshot but then they just thought it was a silencer. It was funny though while I was on my way to the hospital
that I wasn't as sad as I wanted to be. I mean, MY FRIEND IS DEAD and i'm not crying? I got scared because the cops would think that I was the killer but
then I wasn't worried anymore because they wouldn't be able to find any evidence of me killing him, but I diddn't kill him! Oh god what am I thinking...
At the hospital I told them everything they needed to know, almost... I couldn't stay at my apartment anymore because it was being investigated so I stayed
at my parents house... 2 days after the incident I was getting worried what they had found in my apartment when all of a sudden there was a knock at the
door. I went to answer it but my parents told me just to stay in my room and they'd get it. Man I felt like a kid again that just did something bad and
was grounded for it. I heard footsteps upstairs so I knew that they just got in but then I heard them talking while they where coming to my room. When they
got there a cop held up his badge and told me that I was being arrested for killing my good friend!! How could they think it was me? I diddn't do anything...
This was the first time i've been in a cop car. I felt scared because I knew I was going to jail but I diddn't do anything. I thought of all the excuses
that I could think of... I lost. I lost the case in court. I don't know why. I hired the best lawyer money could by but he diddn't do a good a job as I
thought he would. He even was convinced that I killed him. So much for my whell spent money but I don't care about money anymore. I'm in jail and that's
where i'm going to stay... Days went by and all I could think of was what I had for dinner the other night, horrible slop from the kitchen. I was going
crazy. I couldn't think anymore I just sat there. When I felt like giving up and just killing myself I heard the door open. I blinding light filled the
cell I was in. I blocked my face with my hands and then the light faded and my eye sight restored. I looked up and there I saw a man. "who are you?" I
said. All he said was not to kill myself and that he would be back in 3 days and he would make everything better. As the cell door closed and I was all
alone again I thought too myself "i could have sworn I saw wings".
Unknown "Brentie" Carefree
- 16 years, 9 months, 15 days ago
